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Add important note about headnode domain name, and the following sections: a) Setup SDC-Docker, b) Configure Client Access to CloudAPI

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@khangngu commented at 2018-12-17T23:55:35

Patch Set 1: Code-Review+1

@khangngu commented at 2018-12-17T23:55:57

Removed the following votes:

  • CI-Testing+1 by Joyent Automation (1000005)
@johnlevon commented at 2018-12-20T16:36:17

Patch Set 1:

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Patch Set 1 code comments
docs/developer-guide/coal-setup.md#150 @johnlevon

"alphanumeric"?

docs/developer-guide/coal-setup.md#383 @johnlevon

"Substitute"?

…ions: a) Setup SDC-Docker, b) Configure Client Access to CloudAPI
|"root" password|rootpass|Enter aphanumeric characters. Do not use space or special characters.|
|Confirm "root" password|||
|"admin" password|adminpass1||
|"admin" password|adminpass1|Enter aphanumeric characters. Do not use space or special characters.|
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Password parsing was fixed in OS-7361 (joyent/sdc-headnode@ b5c0e5a5f6e0ed31c6db2573de9b720d851af603), so these comments on passwords are unnecessary (and dangerous).

|Region of Datacenter|orbit||
|Name of Datacenter|coal-1|(Availability zone.) |
|Region of Datacenter|orbit|Enter aphanumeric characters. Do not use space or special characters.|
|Name of Datacenter|coal-1|Enter aphanumeric characters. Do not use space or special characters.|
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These should be something like "must be DNS name compliant strings".

We can now access access the operations portal, "SDC ADMINUI", in a web
browser on the host computer at https://10.88.88.3/ .
You can now access the Operations Portal (SDC ADMINUI) in a web browser on the host computer at <https://10.88.88.3>.
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All prose should be hard wrapped prior to 80 columns for readability in terminals.

# Add the SSH key. Substiture real value for {username}.
sdc-useradm add-key {username} /var/tmp/id_rsa.pub
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Lines 348 to 386: All prose should be hard wrapped prior to 80 columns for readability in terminals.

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