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PR creator: Description

SLE 16 upgrade article

PR creator: Are there any relevant issues/feature requests?

PR reviewer: Checklist for editorial review

Apart from the usual checks, please double-check also the following:

@cwickert cwickert force-pushed the sle16-upgrade-JSC#DOCTEAM-1888 branch from 0f1de81 to bf96f1f Compare October 23, 2025 07:25
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Hi Christoph, please see my suggestions.
Thanks!

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Hi, please see my suggestions for this one. Thanks!

&prompt.sudo; reboot</screen>
<para>
The <package>suse-migration-sle16-activation</package> package installs
<package>SLES16-Migration</package> as dependency and modifies the bootloader
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<package>SLES16-Migration</package> as dependency and modifies the bootloader
<package>SLES16-Migration</package> as a dependency and modifies the bootloader

<term>Use <command>run_migration</command> on s390x: </term>
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Modifying the boot loader configuration is not supported on s390x, therefor you start
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Modifying the boot loader configuration is not supported on s390x, therefor you start
Modifying the boot loader configuration is not supported on s390x, so you start

&prompt.sudo; <command>run_migration</command></screen>
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The <command>run_migration</command> utility uses <command>&kexec;</command> and does
not work in &xen; based environments. If <command>&kexec;</command> causes a kernel
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not work in &xen; based environments. If <command>&kexec;</command> causes a kernel
not work in &xen;-based environments. If <command>&kexec;</command> causes a kernel

Round one, more to follow...

Co-authored-by: lvicoun <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Daria Vladykina <[email protected]>
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I will push a commit that addresses most open issues except the ones I have commented on (the profiling of the metadata)

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request response contains the list of repositories required to upgrade the system. This
requires the system to be upgraded to be registered. Additionally, the server providing the
updates must have the necessary channels available and those channels must be up to date.
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Clarified: "This requires the system to be registered before the upgrade."

and make xml:ids + filenames consistent
@cwickert cwickert force-pushed the sle16-upgrade-JSC#DOCTEAM-1888 branch from b4d9755 to 315dbd1 Compare October 24, 2025 10:18
@cwickert cwickert merged commit cf4d5ff into main Oct 24, 2025
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@cwickert cwickert deleted the sle16-upgrade-JSC#DOCTEAM-1888 branch October 24, 2025 10:59
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