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Hi Amrita,
please see my suggestion. Thanks!

<merge>
<title>Ansible Linux system roles</title>
<revhistory xml:id="rh-ansible">
<revision><date>2025-09-19</date>
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<revision><date>2025-09-19</date>
<revision><date>2025-11-04</date>


<!-- Productname & Version -->
<meta name="productname" its:translate="no">
<productname version="16">&sles;</productname>
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<productname version="16">&sles;</productname>
<productname version="16.0" os="sles">&productname;</productname>

<!-- S T R U C T U R E -->
<structure renderas="article" xml:id="ansible-roles" xml:lang="en">
<merge>
<title>Ansible Linux system roles</title>
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<title>Ansible Linux system roles</title>
<title>Ansible Linux System Roles</title>

</meta>

<!-- Social Media -->
<meta name="title" its:translate="yes">Ansible Linux system roles</meta>
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<meta name="title" its:translate="yes">Ansible Linux system roles</meta>
<meta name="title" its:translate="yes">Ansible Linux System Roles</meta>

<listitem>
<para>
This article gives an introduction to various Ansible Linux system roles that help to automate the configuration and management
on &productname; 16.0 systems.
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on &productname; 16.0 systems.
on &productname; &productnumber; systems.

xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
xmlns:trans="http://docbook.org/ns/transclusion">
<info>
<title>About the journald Linux system role</title>
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I believe this should be included in

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<title>About the journald Linux system role</title>
<title>About the <literal>journald</literal> Linux system role</title>

<meta name="maintainer" content="[email protected]" its:translate="no"/>
<abstract>
<para>
The journald Linux system role in Ansible is designed to configure and manage the <literal>systemd-journald</literal> service on &productname; 16.0 systems.
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The journald Linux system role in Ansible is designed to configure and manage the <literal>systemd-journald</literal> service on &productname; 16.0 systems.
The <literal>journald</literal> Linux system role in Ansible is designed to configure and manage the <literal>systemd-journald</literal> service on &productname; 16.0 systems.

<meta name="maintainer" content="[email protected]" its:translate="no"/>
<abstract>
<para>
The &keylime; Linux system role in Ansible automate the deployment and configuration of the Keylime attestation system for establishing trust in Linux infrastructure
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The &keylime; Linux system role in Ansible automate the deployment and configuration of the Keylime attestation system for establishing trust in Linux infrastructure
The &keylime; Linux system role in Ansible automate the deployment and configuration of the &keylime; attestation system for establishing trust in Linux infrastructure

</para>
</abstract>
</info>
<para>A comprehensive Keylime setup requires several distinct roles to be applied to different sets of hosts:</para>
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<para>A comprehensive Keylime setup requires several distinct roles to be applied to different sets of hosts:</para>
<para>A comprehensive &keylime; setup requires several distinct roles to be applied to different sets of hosts:</para>

<meta name="maintainer" content="[email protected]" its:translate="no"/>
<abstract>
<para>
To install Ansible Linux system roles on a &productname; 16.0 control node:
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To install Ansible Linux system roles on a &productname; 16.0 control node:
To install Ansible Linux system roles on a &productname; &productnumber; control node:

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