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CheezItMan
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| if self.completed_at is None: | ||
| if self.goal_id is None: | ||
| task_dict = { | ||
| "id":self.id, | ||
| "title":self.title, | ||
| "description":self.description, | ||
| "is_complete": False | ||
| } | ||
| else: | ||
| task_dict = { | ||
| "id":self.id, | ||
| "goal_id": self.goal_id, | ||
| "title":self.title, | ||
| "description":self.description, | ||
| "is_complete": False | ||
| } | ||
| else: | ||
| task_dict = { | ||
| "id":self.id, | ||
| "title":self.title, | ||
| "description":self.description, | ||
| "is_complete": True | ||
| } | ||
| return task_dict |
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This seems a little over-complicated. Could you do the basic dictionary in one block and then add key-value pairs based on an if-else?
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| task_bp = Blueprint("task_bp",__name__, url_prefix="/tasks") | ||
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| def get_one_task_or_abort(task_id): |
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| if "title" not in request_body or \ | ||
| "description" not in request_body: | ||
| return jsonify({"details": "Invalid data"}), 400 |
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Good validation here. However I think you should also indicate what data is invalid.
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| return { | ||
| "task":{ | ||
| "id" : new_task.id, | ||
| "title" : new_task.title, | ||
| "description" : new_task.description, | ||
| "is_complete" : new_task.is_complete | ||
| } | ||
| }, 201 |
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This return value might be useful as a helper function for reuse.
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| if not title_param: | ||
| tasks = Task.query.all() | ||
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| if sort_param == "desc": | ||
| tasks = Task.query.order_by(Task.title.desc()).all() | ||
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| if sort_param == "asc": | ||
| tasks = Task.query.order_by(Task.title.asc()).all() |
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This might cause Task.query to execute twice making this potentially twice as slow as it needs to be.
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| SLACK_PATH = "https://slack.com/api/chat.postMessage" | ||
| SLACK_BOT_TOKEN = os.environ.get("SLACK_BOT_TOKEN") | ||
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| headers = { | ||
| "Authorization" : f"Bearer {SLACK_BOT_TOKEN}" | ||
| } | ||
| params = { | ||
| "channel": "task-notifications", | ||
| "text": f"Someone just completed the task {update_is_valid_id.title}" | ||
| } | ||
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| requests.get(url=SLACK_PATH, headers=headers, params=params) |
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The Slack portion would make a good candidate for a helper function.
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| if "title" not in request_body: | ||
| return jsonify({"details": "Invalid data"}), 400 |
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Again indicating what data is invalid would be useful.
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