Update main.py #2335
Update main.py #2335
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Great job implementing the core logic! The two-pass approach works well, and you've successfully created and linked the Person instances. However, this submission requires changes because it doesn't follow several key guidelines from the project checklist, which are important requirements for this task. Please address the following points:
- Use List Comprehension: The initial creation of
Personobjects should be done with a list comprehension instead of aforloop, as required by [CHECKLIST ITEM #3]. - Improve Conditional Logic: The checks for spouses use
if "key" in dataand nestedifstatements. Please refactor this to use thedict.get()method and combine conditions into a singleifstatement. This addresses [CHECKLIST ITEM #2] and [CHECKLIST ITEM #4].
Making these changes will bring your code in line with the project's standards. I'm looking forward to your next submission!
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app/main.py
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| for data in people_data: | ||
| name = str(data["name"]) | ||
| age = int(data["age"]) | ||
| person = Person(name, age) | ||
| persons.append(person) |
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This violates checklist item #3: 'When creating a list of instances from a collection (such as a list of dictionaries), it is recommended to use list comprehension rather than traditional for loops.' This entire block can be replaced with a more concise list comprehension.
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| if "wife" in data and data["wife"] is not None: | ||
| wife_name = str(data["wife"]) | ||
| if wife_name in Person.people: | ||
| person.wife = Person.people[wife_name] |
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This block violates two checklist items. It violates checklist #4 by checking for a key with "wife" in data instead of using the recommended data.get('wife'). It also violates checklist #2 by using a nested if statement on line 30. These conditions can be combined into a single if statement using and for a cleaner approach.
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| if "husband" in data and data["husband"] is not None: | ||
| husband_name = str(data["husband"]) | ||
| if husband_name in Person.people: | ||
| person.husband = Person.people[husband_name] |
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Excellent work on this revision! I am approving your solution as you've successfully addressed all the previous feedback and met all the project requirements. The logic is clear, and your use of list comprehension and dict.get() is implemented perfectly.
The automated checks have flagged a minor linting issue in app/main.py on line 13, where a docstring is slightly too long. You can easily fix this by shortening the text to be under 79 characters. This is just a style note and doesn't affect the approval. Well done!
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