Improving sentence building

Author: snakefoot

index.html

@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@ <h1 class="page-header" id="welcome">
         <p class="lead">
             NLog is a flexible and free logging platform for various .NET platforms, including .NET standard.
 
-            NLog makes it easy to write to several  <a href="{{ site.baseurl }}/config/?tab=targets">targets</a>. (console, file, database, etc.) and change the logging configuration on-the-fly.
+            NLog makes it easy to write to several <a href="{{ site.baseurl }}/config/?tab=targets">targets</a>. (console, file, database, etc.) and change the logging configuration on-the-fly.
         </p>
 
         <p>
-            NLog has support for <a href="https://github.com/NLog/NLog/wiki/How-to-use-structured-logging">structured</a> 
+            NLog supports both <a href="https://github.com/NLog/NLog/wiki/How-to-use-structured-logging">structured</a>
             and traditional logging.
         </p>
 
@@ -41,8 +41,7 @@ <h4>Output formats</h4>
                         <a href="https://github.com/NLog/NLog/wiki/JsonLayout">JSON</a>,
                         <a href="https://github.com/NLog/NLog/wiki/XmlLayout">XML</a>,
                         <a href="https://github.com/NLog/NLog/wiki/CsvLayout">CSV</a> etc.,
-                        The output can be enriched by using the many <a href="{{ site.baseurl }}/config/?tab=layout-renderers">layout renders</a>,
-                        that are able to automatically capture additional output details when logging.
+                        The logging output can be enriched with additional context details using <a href="{{ site.baseurl }}/config/?tab=layout-renderers">layout renders</a>.
                     </p>
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